Hello, this is my first post on the forum. It’s my short film made in 3 months. The majority of the project was done in Blender, and for the other software, ZBrush, Substance, Nuke, and Photoshop. Even though I finished the project, I am open to criticism. Thank you.
I like everything about this. It is very well done, and pleasant to view.
But, I feel I am missing something about the story.
Bird noises, distraction, face=skull, screen goes black, back to meditation.
The closest I can guess is that ADD (Attention Deficit Disorder) is bad for becoming a better ninja?
You’ve done a great job on the modeling and visuals and animation!
Thank you for sharing this. I hope you share more animations in the future!!
Thank you very much, Shannon . In reality, there were supposed to be several scenes where the character would be distracted by various surrounding elements, and this scene was not the last one where he lost patience. This would require me to do a lot more work, so I preferred to limit myself to this scene to avoid completely abandoning the project.
We’ve all been there.
But nice clean modeling and great textures, and some nice animation.
I like the way the setup for the faceplate and changing the textures.
“What you have done so far” is very good, and should encourage you to keep going. I think that the "martial-arts animation" is noticeably good. Yes, you have “a lot more work” to do – no surprises there(!) – but what you have so far is an excellent and well-detailed beginning. Keep going, and keep us posted.