Noli Me Tangere Project is FINISHED!!!!

Artwork Animations
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I passed it with flying colors!:smiley:
Thanks to all who help me complete my work!
Heres a poster for yah!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3422/3211846371_424d181878_o.jpg
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enjoy!

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Wow, very nice, especially for only two weeks of work. Some critiques: I would’ve added more movement to the scene, either make the grass move, or give the characters more movement. And that clip of the overhead view didn’t look super good. Mainly because the grass was kind of sparse. Otherwise, amazing job!

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Congratulations to a great project! Keep it up!

/ Mats

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Nice work. It’s great to hear Tagalog in a Blender animation! Ay maganda!

5

Get rid of that wide angle lens, it looks too gamey.

6

Nice cinematography, but in the future don’t take mouth shapes so literally, “round them off” a bit. Elephant shoe!

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Thanks for all the comments!!

Thanks. This is really my first 2 minute animation(the longest one I’ve ever done!) and my first attempt at lip syncing. Next time, “I will round them off” a bit. btw…Elephant shoe???:eek::eek:
lol

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ayos kabayan! masyado lang mabilis ang galaw ng labi at hindi bagay ang voice over sa character nila elias at ibarra. gayun pa man magaling.

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Elephant shoe was supposed to be “elephant juice” sorry about that. I’m sure that makes more sense.
Richard William’s excellent book Animators Survival Kit has a chapter on dialogue, and uses that phrase as an example of rounding off mouth shapes.

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It’s pretty nice. I can see your skills. But it’s a pitty you used 3D for just a realistic dialog. The sky is the limit and I just see some guys in some gras.