It looks confusing… or pointless… You might want to rethink the way you are “putting it”… the techniques seem to be ok… but… rethink the overall scene layout.
u got my forest idea down pat 
just maybe spread them apart, have the electricity jumping all over the dead one, break it’s glass, and somehow get it to look like the others it looks out of place. But great work so far! And the metal scraps for flooring is a great idea!