I will add details later, But I do want some opinions about the aesthetics and composition
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Compositionally it’s not bad, although it’s a very strange angle. The camera is nearly level with those street lamps, which means this camera is 20 or so feet up in the air. I think moving your camera to a realistic height- so that it’s level with the car- would make a big difference. Also, the car is perfectly centered, I’d tilt your camera to the left or the right after adjusting the height so the car falls on one of the lower thirds. You can turn the Rule of Thirds overlay on in your camera settings, I’d recommend doing that here, it’s the simplest way to get good composition quickly
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The lights are too low. Think about the height of a semi trailer and make them a bit taller than that.
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Lowering the camera is a good idea and it really makes the scene look more dramatic, but I am probably not going to tilt the camera as it looks too much like a car chase shot which is not what I envisioned when I planned the scene.
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Aside from the lights being too low, what’s important here? What is happening? The lights are drawing all the attention at this time, but I doubt that’s what you want.
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lights fixtures to low and too big
also sidewalks same size then street ???
street’s width is way to small
also distance between light poles is too small
bricks are too big - looks like giant bricks
you need to rework scene proportions here !
happy bl