OTH III possible entry... maybe

ok, i have a feeling that there’s no way i’ll be able to finish this by the deadline, but i’m gonna keep working on it because i have a tendency to be wrong once in a while (that’s quite rare for me actually :wink: ).

http://mysite.iptic.com/mazer/faces.jpg

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you see too much of the whites of his eyes… looks scared instead of scary! you can see alot of the ridge line (above eyes) in the mask so spend some time there defining it and you notice it pop and come to life a little more. great work so far.

keep us posted.

could you explain what you mean?