Couple comments though, eyes don’t appear to tend to have veins on the outside segment, at least showing in pictures that I can see - and when they do, they seem to be much smaller (started looking from comment before)
Might want to move the lower lashes up a bit, seems like it should go straight from the pink part to lashes:
From the angle you’ve chosen, or at least this close up, it seems like we should be able to see the carnucle, or the inner part of the eyelids should be pulled back a little bit:
Kinda hard to tell what angle you’ve chosen.
Lastly, I would say the blue-grey to white and veiny transition is kinda weird. I’m not seeing that sort of shadow or coloration difference on pretty much any of the pics I’m seeing.
Of course, I’ve only started studying the eye in-depth since I’ve seen this post, so could be I’m way off base - just pointing out what my scrutiny is noticing!