I’m not an artist but I had this idea for a comic strip and decided to use Blender to make it happen. It’s a very quick work and I know that technically the art is shit, but I’m looking for feedback on the plot and execution. It was rendered in BI. I’m planning to post it on Twitter but not before some feedback and possibly some improvements. Some knowledge of national flags is necessary to understand it, but I’m not dumbing it down (please don’t suggest that)… if you don’t get it: (Hungary -> ~3 Italy, Costa Rica -> ~4 Netherlands -> ~2 France, US -> ~Chile (Fail), others are in the strip - Austria, Poland, Indonesia, Monaco). I know in some countries cutting a flag is obscene, a crime and such, so I hope nobody gets offended or something, that’s not the intention.
Points of focus:
- Continuity - does the story ‘progress’ naturally and intuitively?
- Clarity - Is intention clear specially on the first 2 and last 3 images
- Layout - I’m no comic strip expert, I’m not sure if the layout is unequivocal
C&Cs are much appreciated.