First off, I’d like to greatly thank ShadowDragon (as he calls himself) for making the excellent video tutorial on face modeling. This couldn’t have been done without your help! Thank you so much!
As said, I have followed the video tutorial loosely upon my own reference. I haven’t tweaked it too much yet so I’d like some comments on what to improve
Issues
Notice that there is some strange ridge on the right side of the right eye (viewed from you) looking as if a shadow is very displaced. I only have one shadow casting light of three. What can the reason be?
There are some shadowy fragments, for example on the bridge on the forehead… I’m wondering why these appear. I have recalculated the normals.
Please leave some C&C
I will try to add hair as well when the head is finished
i like the nose topology meeting with the mouth topology a lot, i think all of your issues are simply related to certain edges being just a hair too low compared to others neighboring edges in the topology …
also the sides of the mouth are seem to need some tweaking imo.
it is however a very good and these are mostly nitpicks:)
one other thing is usually the nose / forehead connection doesnt end in a point like you have in your forehead but its usually atleast a plane connecting the two areas.
