Hi. This is WIP on my second render. I would appreciate any advice.
Here are a couple of observations. Judging from the size of the rose the bricks of the wall are a little small and the planks of the floor are a lot too small. I believe that the canister with the gauge is supposed to be aluminum but the texture make it look like plastic. A fantastic concept and nice render, I hope to see it finished.
As Exanimis said, a really awesome concept. I would add bumpmapping to the table, and perhaps model the controls on the box to the left. I’m pretty sure it’s just an image- it looks quite flat. Really nice job so far, though! 