Sakura tree sidewalk #Update 9/2/15#

Kevin_Tee · January 16, 2015, 11:53am

#Update 2, 9/2/15#

I changed the grass instead of hair to particle mesh which I model my sel. Add sky and some bush. What do you think?

lossless > http://theorysend.com/uploads/0c2dfec75639dc234fb1f1fbbc239df83220d8d5

#Update1#
After rendering on my poor tablet core i5 inside refrigerator for 25 hours finally done.

Change sunlamp to yellowish, add sunbeam and minor composition.
I’m still deciding the best way to end the skyline.
What do you think?

Hi, this scene was inspired by some anime scene. The polygons are clearly observed on the trees, but if subdivide my ram couldn’t take it.

-What should the background be? A very long path and disappear into fog?
-Should I add volumetric lighting through the trees?
-What do you think about the sakura tree?

I feel that lighting are not good enough.

Thank you

NID_Graphics · January 16, 2015, 12:00pm

Excellent cartoonish realism! Very nice feel to the image!

Kevin_Tee · January 16, 2015, 12:42pm

Thank you, I think giving a more yellowish sunlight might makes it look warmer.

NID_Graphics · January 16, 2015, 1:29pm

I also think a little yellow from the sun lamp would be nice, that and a little bit of a sky texture in the background. After that I think this would be good!
Keep up the excellent work!

nicky2048 · January 16, 2015, 1:39pm

quite nice already!
for the path i would make the long path fading to the fog and raise the camera so that you were sort of in the middle height between the path and the trees, that way you are not too high (camera-wise) but still “looking down” on the path.

Kevin_Tee · January 16, 2015, 8:10pm

Thanks for every reply. I will cut my scene to multiple parts. This image and the fading.

Smokey · January 21, 2015, 11:12am

Particle driven fence, omg

Kevin_Tee · January 21, 2015, 11:02pm

What do you mean? These fence did not generated by particle.

Kevin_Tee · January 29, 2015, 3:26am

The lighting were improve and subdivision were applied to the trees that is close to the camera.

juanrav · February 7, 2015, 6:26am

I like it, it´s surreal, maybe some mountains at the sides and at the end could be a good idea.

BitterBrushAnim · February 8, 2015, 10:32am

it seems to me that there needs to be some things in the far background. maybe mountains or city… anything but just blue.

Kevin_Tee · March 9, 2015, 9:19am

#Update 9/2/15#

I changed the grass instead of hair to particle mesh which I model my sel. Add sky and some bush. What do you think?