SALOON - A short animation

Really good job. Did you watch “The Last Beer”? Recent animation also with sliding beer.

You had the most important thing first: a good idea. You had good characters too. And music. And sound.

You suggested about the shading/lighting. I think the characters could be lighter and the background darker to help them stand out. I think the bottle should fall right after the guy falls, but then take a little bit to roll away. And I was surprised the bottle rolled off the back; I thought the wood board was flush against the wall and it makes more sense for me if it rolls off the front.

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