Nice, but overall felling ins more medieval Europe than Japan. Also, there is not even small c in Cyber.
Don’t get me wrong, render have good look. But all other is miss.
Maybe you can add some stuff on walls. Remember how they in Bladerunner “upgrade” old brick buildings with some tubes, cables, and gadgets? No matter if this don’t have sense, only important is that they look as they have function.
Maybe you can add “cyber secure” door on house on left, some SF dumpsters… such stuff.