sea monster

Here it is: my underwater scene with a sea monster. I believe it is nearly complete, but I am open to suggestions about what it may need. C&C are welcome.

Have a nice day.

P.S. The sea monster was made in MakeHuman and the underwater effect was created using a tutorial that was recommended to me in one of the support forums.

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Looks too green for underwater and work a little on the lighting the monster isn’t distinct enough.

Pompey, this is the third thread you’ve started on this project! Why? Stick to the same thread. You shouldn’t make multiple identical threads.

Back to the project…
I agree with Musk, way to green. Since this is underwater, things would actually be a lot darker. Give a slight dark blue-green hue to it, not bright yellow-green.

Thank you, and I apologize for the multiple threads.

Here is an update.

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No problem. And nice fake caustics, that’s a nice way of doing it. You should try animating it! Do you have mist set in the settings? Usually it is very clear underwater. You got that blueish hue correct, but it still looks like there is smoke underwater, like a thick haze.

No, I am not using mist; I don’t know what could be causing the smoky effect. Here is the link to the tutorial on the caustics. Just scroll down a little and you will see it. It’s the one with three parts.

http://www.dnapixels.com/tuts%20and%20tricks.html

Here is what I got after changing the lighting. Is the smoky effect still there?

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