Shotgun

Artwork Works in Progress
#1

So I made this shotgun I think it’s almost finished but there is something wrong with it and I think it’s the textures well anyway check it out and tell me what you think about it.

Shotgun with textures:
[img=http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6208/shotgun2ju.th.jpg]

Shotgun without textures except ground:
[img=http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6266/shotgun13hi.th.jpg]

Shotgun solid and wire:
[img=http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/672/shotgun1wire4jk.th.jpg]

C&C so much apreciated, thanks

Matt

#2

To me the barrel looks too long. Especially in the render, it could be just the camera-angle though. Also, shouldn’t the top and bottom barrels be connected? It doesn’t seem to be so. The metall material could also use some refining, I don’t exactly know what though.

The mesh looks very clean.

#3

If you’re going for a remington style, you need a cocking lever. In general, you’ll need something to work the bolt. Even semi-auto shotguns have a pump handle to prime the bolt. Barrel does look a tad long too.

#4

The pump handle seems to be welded onto the tubing its suppose to slide across. Also, Set Smooth the ammo.

#5

Is

http://www.fas.org/man/dod-101/sys/land/12-gauge-dvic519.jpg
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what you were going for? Can you see how you did the pump-handle and connection at the front of the barrel wrong? Of course, it’s still a WIP, and you can certainly fix it.

#6

Well ive been busy with some things but you can’t really see any changes I guess. I rendered it 1280X1024 and full quality so that took pretty long.
I kinda like this one I know it’s far from being photorealistic but I think it’s cool for now. How about you?

www.matt.m2h.nl/gallery/Shotgunfinal.jpg

Thanks for your comments all!

Matt

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#7

Is looking better Maat, but aren’t you missing the loading part of the shotgun? the wooden grip by the barrel…also the shotgun shells caould be better modeled i think…

#8

You removed the pump completely and still haven’t connected the barrels. I wouldn’t call it finished yet…

#9

Oke then how about this:

www.matt.m2h.nl/shotgunfinal.jpg

C&C much apreciated.

#10

Almost! It looks much better but there’s a lump in the lower barrel past the pump handle, which I think is left over from your old pump handle. The pump also still looks a little like it’s welded to the frame, but it’s much better.