So I made this shotgun I think it’s almost finished but there is something wrong with it and I think it’s the textures well anyway check it out and tell me what you think about it.
To me the barrel looks too long. Especially in the render, it could be just the camera-angle though. Also, shouldn’t the top and bottom barrels be connected? It doesn’t seem to be so. The metall material could also use some refining, I don’t exactly know what though.
If you’re going for a remington style, you need a cocking lever. In general, you’ll need something to work the bolt. Even semi-auto shotguns have a pump handle to prime the bolt. Barrel does look a tad long too.
what you were going for? Can you see how you did the pump-handle and connection at the front of the barrel wrong? Of course, it’s still a WIP, and you can certainly fix it.
Well ive been busy with some things but you can’t really see any changes I guess. I rendered it 1280X1024 and full quality so that took pretty long.
I kinda like this one I know it’s far from being photorealistic but I think it’s cool for now. How about you?
Is looking better Maat, but aren’t you missing the loading part of the shotgun? the wooden grip by the barrel…also the shotgun shells caould be better modeled i think…
Almost! It looks much better but there’s a lump in the lower barrel past the pump handle, which I think is left over from your old pump handle. The pump also still looks a little like it’s welded to the frame, but it’s much better.
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