Slim sniper

Artwork Focused Critiques
1

Hello

This is my new work - a comic-style poster. I need some suggestion before final stage of postprocesing.

Does it look like “warning” poster? What do you think?

http://unixlab.cs.put.poznan.pl/~inf82127/inne/KONKURSFINALLOxxPO.jpg

Thanks

2

It looks awesome, but the butt of the rifle is floating above his fingers a bit, so you may want to lower it. No idea what you mean about ‘warning’, but I like the concept.

3

Nice render- the shading and textures are very good. It doesn’t make me think of a warning poster though- just of a good render.

4

Looking very good!

Some crits (you posted in focused critique):

  • the holes in the pelvic look strange, did you overtake these from a real medicine skeleton model?
  • the skeleton and the rifle are on the same “layer”, e.g. there is no clear fore- and background… maybe you can change this by giving the scene more light and shadows… this would probably better the whole image

just my opinion…