It’s an intriguing abstract. The only suggestion that I might make is that a very slight amount of light might be needed to make the cheek area and face not be completely black.
I will try it thanks! I was also thinking about making the lights around the lasers on her face a bit wider
If you feel like lighting isn’t your best skill it’s good to find a good reference. It can be either a screencap from a movie, a photo or any other CG artwork.
Trying to mimic something that actually works is a great way to understand why does it work in the first place. There are Millions of scenes from movies that have lighting that will also work on your scene.
If you are more patient and have more time to learn, you can read something like this https://chrisbrejon.com/cg-cinematography/
Thank for your suggestions, the site is great I should have learned about it a long time ago ahah