An animation I’m working on. This is the intro. I’d appreciate any feed back.

Wow, unique style and story. Only thing that could be improved is how the neck and the girls coat connect. Its very noticeable and takes you out of the story. Want to see the rest,very promising.

Thanks fo the advice. Unfortunately I’ve hit the point of production where changes to the model would be difficult to implement. I’ll be sure to consider your advice in the future.(PS sorry for the late reply :))