This is my first serious render and it has taken around 6 weeks working around an hour a day to get to this stage. It was rendered using Blender internal.
I’d suggest NOT using BI for interior stills.
And, is that a hole on the sink?
Anyway, the modeling is pretty good, but i suggest adding more polygons, because i see some normal flaws on the bath for example. (Right top corner of the bath).
The ground looks tiled.
Everything else - good.
That’s very nice for your first project!