Titanfall 2 Stim Pilot

Timey · December 17, 2020, 2:38am

Heya, this is the first character I’ve ever made, it’s for a school project. Based closely on the Stim Pilot from Titanfall 2.

Since I’m new I can’t embed more than one photo, so here’s more
Quick turntable animation
I’m looking for critique for everything relating to character creation and hard surface modelling. Stuff like proportion, details, and anything obvious I may have made a mistake on

Thicc_Boi · December 17, 2020, 2:14pm

Can you show a Full photo?
Like from a view-point from a bit far away?

Timey · December 17, 2020, 5:13pm

Thicc_Boi · December 18, 2020, 8:18am

According to the album,
The body looks way too big for those limbs, add a bit of evenness to the model.

Timey · December 18, 2020, 4:40pm

Way too big like the front to back length, or the width?

Thicc_Boi · December 19, 2020, 8:50am

Everything, the limbs just seem a tad to thin, but the length is good