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I like the stylized modelling and the tree bark texturing is really convincing.
Since you’re asking for advice I would say overall that the piece lacks a focal point, I didn’t really know where to look when going into it, even though there are tons of interesting set pieces scattered around.
Maybe try to use a lighting setup that’s a bit less homogeneous ? All the shadows are very soft and the elements don’t really stand out from the background. Adding a character in the middle could help draw attention there too.
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There’s quite a lot of issues with textures in my opinion. The modeling of the trees are good, but the textures and their usage is quite weird? There are some stretching of textures, and a seam is visible on the branch near the bed (where the desk sits).
Maybe this tree texture needs displacement? Like, a lot.
Your textures may also be too reaslistic for the stryle you are going for.
The lighting is very much uniform, and makes it not super interesting to look at.
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