A visualization of a tropical terrace with Safari style vibe. I’m looking for any kind of feedback but especially usefull would be some constructive one The models except for the vegetation were model for this scene specifically. I had some issues with animating the beach (waves) and i had to solve it in a creative way.
I also shared all of the models created for this scene on my Patreon page.
Nice job! I like the Render-4 the best. For some reason the animation feels a little bit like it’s zooming into a miniature rather than a full size room. Maybe the forced DOF? I also had to scrub back and forth a couple of times to figure out there was a glass lower wall because of how the DOF was changing. At first I thought there was a translucent screen on the top of that outside view until I realized it was really a lower glass wall and the upper area was just open. Maybe because the lower part of the exterior view seen through that glass wall is in focus well before the upper part comes into focus? Some reflections on that glass wall might help sell it more too. But overall it looks good! I like the models and the waves look good too!