Hey ! I think you did great, there are a lot of interesting elements, but the lighting and to a lesser extent the materials don’t help the overall composition :
There is a lot of elements to process and there isn’t a visual hierachy that tell our eyes what’s important in the image, and in which order to process it.
As a result I find myself a bit lost in all those details without having some map to process them and therefore apreciate them to their fullest.
The lighting could have helped to organize stuff better IMO.
Which is generally less an issue in your other work, but lighting, and ligthing as a compositional tool is probably something you should look into and your images are going to get even better !