Velociraptor - Feedback Wanted

Hey everyone, this is a low poly velociraptor model I have been working on. Currently it is just static, though I plan on rigging it and animating.

I’m a beginner when it comes to Blender so I’m really interested in any feedback anyone might have, namely regarding the style of the character.

Is there anything I should do/avoid in order to elevate it?

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I feel like it looks pretty good but personally the head kinda reminds me of a dogs head but it looks pretty good other than that :+1:

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As the other person said, the head does seem a little canine in shape. It is mostly caused by the lips curling in like that - if you look up velociraptor references, their lips are never curled in like that. The indented curve on top of the head is very dog-like as well.

Here is yours next to a version I edited the head shape of, if that helps you see what I mean.

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Thanks a lot! Your edit does make it look a lot more “dinosaur-like”. I will work on adjusting the head and the lips to try and achieve a little more of a paleo-accurate look.

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Of course - it is no problem! I am glad I could help. :slight_smile:

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