Verner the ferry animal - Critique wanted

Hi, I’ve been working on this character for some time and would like to hear if you have any critiques to give me. I’m pretty pleased with how it looks but may I take it one step further? I new here by the way[ATTACH=CONFIG]423924

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I really like the eyeball and the fur is done quite well. The rest has lots of issue though. First to note is that the eyeball doesn’t sit well into the face. It looks like it is about to pop out. Another is the nose. I think you are going for a cat’s, but it looks more like a pig’s. The mouth also needs some more attention. This a good first try to a character and one that is full fur. They are really difficult to do.

Let us see a render without the fur, just to take a look on the main mesh (with gray shader and a wireframe version please), so we can have a better critique.

Thank you both for your answers, I’ll maybe soon post a grey render (clay render?)! One thing I may do to improve it is maybe to add more fur to the face.