Video Game Competition Space Scene Update

Hi there.

I’m quite new to Blender, and dabbling with an entry (just for fun) for the latest Blender Guru competition concerning gaming.

I’m a great fan of the old Space Quest games from Sierra, and therefore thought it would be a good idea to use them as inspiration. Specifically (for those who know the series) showing Roger Wilco in his Aluminum Mallard approaching the planet Ortega. A screenshot of the specific moment in the game I’m referring to I have added it below:

Updated WIP:

Any suggestions or comments would be greatly appreciated.