Looks nice, my only critic would be the site left of the building, it looks to empty and unpleasing, especially with the huge wall. Some bushes would help to make it a bit more unseen.
You are right that the framing is too far to the left, let’s say that this is one of those cases of not-lying in the graphic representation of the project, that is, it was important to show a little of the empty lot on the side, for the client’s interest and the proportion of the image corresponds to a printed canvas that will be on the site for sale.
But I agree with your observation, a 1:1 or 4:3 ratio would be more attractive when focusing on the house.