TBH, I hate it. perhaps if I had the corresponding fet1sh, I might be more willing to look over the… everything else that isn’t directly in service of that fet1sh, but it’s certainly not something that has much merit outside of that.
Yeah, sorry, but this does not provoke any positive emotions in me either. 
Animation is… well… it’s not really great. The body forms and movements look disturbing and not related to the music. I would not be able to tell it’s supposed to be a dance. The scene… Well it’s not great either. It’s not rendered really nicely, it’s not lit, materials are not great, camera movement is… well nothing is nice about it really.
It’s nice that you made an animation. It’s a nice thing to do. But maybe think of something more interesting, use some reference and inspiration for the visuals, movements, lighting and other stuff and also dedicate more time to it. This does not look finished at all. Maybe just don’t stop too soon until it looks better…
I remember in school we used to take a notebook (or a textbook really, which you are probably not supposed to do) and doodle something on each page to make flip book animations. Just doodles. But it had to be something funny. Maybe a stick figure running and smashing into a wall or something. Or something gross happening, a head making funny faces or something. Something that had some silly point anyway, you know what I mean? So that is missing here in my view as well. Nothing happens…