Hi guys! This was my first short film and i made it for Asus Pro Artist Award 2022. I would love your opinions!
You can see the video here!
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Not bad. Editing was on point, and the story/idea flowed well.
While the lighting wasn’t exactly bad, I feel like it could be improved. Having a stronger directional light, especially at the start (the foresty area) would’ve been interesting. If the light was a lot stronger and cast harsher shadows, it could’ve added to the sense that the main character is coming to the edge of the known world, or that she’s traveling through a space that’s both “known” (the lit or illuminated areas) into a space that’s “unknown” (the harsh shadows).
Also, small side note (definitely not as important as the lighting,) the character animation could’ve benefited from a few extension frames.
Hope this helps. 
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I really appreciate your comments, this is the first time that I do a job like this and I did it alone, I hope to continue learning, thank you very much
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I think I know what you mean by “extension frames”, but could you clarify that term?
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Um…* wracks brain for suitable description * * comes up with nothing * * hears voice of his mother telling him, “If you can’t define a term in your own words, it means you didn’t really understand what you just said.” *
Is consumed by sadness
Jokes aside, this should help 
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“Extension frames happen at the end of an action, and their job is to exaggerate the key frames and make them more noticeable.” --Royal Skies
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