Ferrari 812 Superfast Render Critique [WIP]


(SK0441) #1

Hello,

I will appreciate your thoughts on this project below. Please post the things you like or dislike. I will try my best to reply and improve the project.
Thanks Again, Enjoy!

For Full-Res links [Recommended]: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1oPZ7wtKQ_dpAbYekw5873MZJIxh6BXKj



These are renders after some touchups in GIMP [for reflections].

I will also render and upload the closeups and interior scenes and also one with an HDRi. Currently working on the interior right now.


The paint material used was of Mike Pan’s which had all the imperfections to make the paint look real. The paint had orange peel, metallic flakes and clearcoat which emulated a real world example.


(Youssef Charles (يوسف تشرلز)) #2

I think a rim light and a less abrupt transition in the BG would help


The first 6.5 mins of this vid might help


(SK0441) #3

Well. What I uploaded right now is a studio render and i will render the model in many different setups. Thanks for the suggestion. Currently mapping the interior.


(SK0441) #4

Update on progress:



(Youssef Charles (يوسف تشرلز)) #5

Woaah!

You’re getting there man!

Can’t wait to see what the whole thing looks like.


(SK0441) #6

Thanks bruh. Heres another one. Full 4k 3840*2160 and it takes a lot of time. Enjoy!


Looks even better on monitor. This is transparent background so that i can choose the floor color later on. thanks for the video and suggestion.


(SK0441) #7

Okay here’s the image after final render:


Let me know if I should change the background.

Full res (couldnt render 4k but 1440p): https://drive.google.com/open?id=1ie...SuWlljfpIgS7hh


(Youssef Charles (يوسف تشرلز)) #8

I think the BG should be darker.


(SK0441) #9

Okay after the bg change:



(Youssef Charles (يوسف تشرلز)) #10

It’s a bit better but,

I’d make it a bit dark and add a vignette, to shift the focus from the background, to the car


(SK0441) #11

This is way better:


Dont mind the pic below

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(SK0441) #12

And after another edit:



(Youssef Charles (يوسف تشرلز)) #13

Ah, now it’s great!

gg