Nefertiti

[onnevan]

Something went wrong with the iris, the map is blurred and looks like it has no detail, I have to check it. I’ll post some wires, but the topology is quite messy, I’m not very good with topology, sometemes it’s like you are in a labyrinth and you cant find your way out, that makes me frustrated and I use to take shortcuts, for example the zone connecting nose and mouth is particularly dissastrous, but I’ll post it anyway

[ROUBAL]

Very nice modelling and texturing ! Great work !

One of my own first models was Thoutmosis III :

http://3d-synthesis.com/7-Thoutmosis_A.html

I wouldn’t show a wireframe, because the topology was rather bad !o)

[onnevan]

Here the bump seems to be too strong. I’ve finished (almost) eyelshes¨:

[Elwebbaro]

Nice progress you got there! Mind the strange shadow cast by the ear.

[RickyBlender]

don’t know about eyelashes here

seems to be difficult to see theses
i had to use a magnifier on my screen to see theses! LOL

but may be normal
unless you can make them a little bit bigger to make it easier to see theses
even if it’s not reality

coming along well

happy 2.5

[onnevan]

Some changes in shapes and added particle hair on the eyebrows:

[charliemcf]

eyelashes look fine here

imo i prefer the previous image with the stronger bump but each to their own

[onnevan]

I would like to hear from you people, what bump map dou you like more, the previous one or this last one?

[RickyBlender]

first one seems more bumpy i guess!

did you apply some SSS here ?

happy 2.5

[charliemcf]

i prefer the first (real skin is like this) and you can always blur it in post-pro (whereas its difficult to make it more detailed when its originally blurry)

i tihnk the “sharp” bump map with some DOF will look nice

[gregzaal]

Are the eyes actually balls? or are they part of the face mesh? - that would explain the giant and flat look to the. wireframe would be helpful

[EnV (Enrico Valenza)]

Nice work indeed, beautiful model.
I prefer the first bump too. The nose looks a bit weird shaped at the bottom, expecially at the attachment to the upper mouth, imo.

[onnevan]

An update, wire and a small screengrab video:

http://www.vimeo.com/14521737

[Serialsiner]

Awesome job, she’s really nice.

[onnevan]

Another view with soft focus:

About the eyes, I like them as they are now, I don’t think they look flat. I made them a little smaller but just a bit, since in my reference images are that size.

[onnevan]

Different Lighing to better see details:

[tyrant_monkey]

she looks really nice, the only thing i would crit is that her eyes are way too big. The are kind of in the anime big eyes range

[rvngizswt]

I could swear you took a photo of someone!

[onnevan]

well, I would’t say she has anime eyes, usually animes have huge eyes, but certainly she seems to have big eyes. I have to chekc my reference pictures because I modeled her on top of an image of the famous Nefertiti bust, in Berlin.
Maybe while sculpting I moved the eyelids.
Thanks for the comment

[onnevan]

Here I post some wires and a render. I have to change iris color and then Move into background and props:

Wires(Subdivision on):

wires comp:

And render alone:

P.S.: I made the eyes a bit smaller, now they’re just like the reference image.