Steelbird -finishline (New update 22/9)

Here’s my new WIP. I’m makin’ a new robot character inspired by the blender logo and the small robot in a picture made by andy.

Here’s the progress:
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/1472/blenderbird6te.jpg

A little work with the neck:

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/4628/blenderbirdprogress11sb.jpg

I would realy appriciate some c&c!

i like… it seems like a chicken… i wich i could give that colour to my works…

Use a HDRI picure to your world “material” and render with yafray! That makes it shine :wink:

i will try that later… tkx …

I think it is good.But you should only improve eye material a bit

yeah … u could open it a bit… :smiley:

Some work on the wings:
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/3656/wing7bc.jpg

Full picture, the eye is a bit more open:
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5237/progress25fz.jpg

nice work… im liking… by the way you could make the “feather” a bit transparent…

The fethers are suposed to be metall, and I havn’t seen any transparent metal. So I don’t think that I will %|

It looks really nice. Kinda reminds me of Anim8or’s bird logo.

ok… so itś good like that… :expressionless:

hmm don’t know if it’s just me but I can’t see the pictures.

Are you swedish ?

Then there is some problems at imageshack!.. Yes i’m swe! And you?

[More progress tomoro’]

just tomorow… i will wait to see…

off topic: do you play hattrick?!?

Nice going Kothe. Waiting for the next update

Klart man är svensk:)
Ofcourse I’m swedish.:slight_smile:

Very nice, I only have one crit. Lengthen the head feathers (if that’s what they are) a bit to make it look more blender-like. And maybe a little more detail on the eye.

snk: Sorry I have to make you dissapointed. I forgot my freakin’ mouse for the laptop today. Maybe I’m able to borrow one from a friend, otherwise there will be no modelling until after 8 hours. And no I don’t play hattrick (What is that?)

foCus:
Swe:
Kul med lite svenskar här. Var håller du till i sverige? Skulle vara kul att fixa en liten träff för oss svenska “blenderheads”!

Eng:
Fun with some swedish people here. Where are you living? Would be fun to meet up with the swedish “blenderheads” some time!

sprinkles: I will add details to the eye later, I write it down on my todo-list. I have to finish the “pre-version” of the body first. And I don’t realy want it to look like the blenderlogo very much, just a tiny bit. So I think I keep the head like it is!

Thanks for your comments!

Here’s the latest update, I have started out with the body. I don’t realy now if the wings turned out like I wanted them to. Any crits on that point?

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/7300/progress35nz.jpg

This is no update. Just some more views to get more c&c.
So please I need you comments!
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/9372/mtop3ca.jpg
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/1316/mside6in.jpg