I thought I would talk about the process of writing this story over the - yes - past 20 years!
What?
Yeah. It all started in 2005!
Wow!
Ok, just realized that now.
The final version I am working on now was hashed out in 2018 so that it was 13 years actually of writing.
From there to here it has been recording the VO and only slight changes.
Ok so here is goes. Probably first and foremost, you have personal growth as a writer and as an artist in general. 20 years or maturity, etc.
As your view changes⌠you get the idea.
Since it was such an overwhelming project, it took time to put together and this started to span years.
This was good and bad.
But purely from a writerâs perspective, there were certain challenges.
First it was because I had invented a set of rules extrapolated from Escherâs relativity. I will share the document I wrote about this in 2008.
The first step was to identify those rules and then invent rules that I needed in order to create a parallel universe.
So in the end Relativity has 3 dimensions and mine would have 6. 3 plus a parallel of 3.
Every story needs an exposition of sorts.
Hitchcock once said, exposition is the bitter pill the audience must swallow.
But an exposition for this would be insane, long, distracting and maybe even boring and just turn an audience away.
There is just too much to absorb in order to understand the drama that exists on a layer above those rules.
For example we all understand gravity. So it takes no explanation to convey the drama of someone hanging by a thread from a rooftop.
But imaging trying to explain that to an alien who had no idea what gravity even is!
So now my idea was to more or less dole these rules out in pieces and weave them into the story dramatically, so that people were being educated without realizing it.
I spent the first 10 years or so writing the story with no dialogue. Just conveying it visually.
I would say each version was successful.
And could have worked as a film.
But I still felt I was missing something.
In 2011 stopped and looked for every interview of Hitchcock and watched every film I could get a copy of swim the beginning. It took a whole. Maybe a month or two.
I kept rewriting after that.
But probably the most important or profound things about this process that took so long was there were quite a number of âwhat ifsâ.
Like, âBut if this is true, wouldnât this over here also be true?â
At first I was avoiding those. Then I realized what great dramatic elements those questions could provide when posed and answered with something dangerous for example.
And what character flaws would those rules exploit in people?
And so on.
At around 2017 I think I first started writing with dialogue.
In 2018 I emerged with the first draft after a few months of just stacks of notes and scene ideas as well as plot scenarios.
I was trying to take the best points of all the earlier attempts.
I pieced together the final version and started recording scratch VO in 2018. Then finished them in 2020. After that we took a break in the studio to work on other projects.
So now, I am working on a blocking animatic using those voices while we organize and get back to work on the final assets.
So while I am not making fundamental changes I do still find myself refining the visual ideas and maybe even some of the sequence of scenes/ shots.
So in effect, to the end, writing continues!