workspace

this is a project I did portraying the workspace, I hope you enjoy, comments and criticisms are welcome
softwar:blender 2.49,Yafaray

http://juliopires3d.files.wordpress.com/2011/08/clay.jpg

Very nice! I love the effort you put in getting the brand labels right and also the materials. I especially like the texturing on the canon camera with the scale along the lens. The slight lens flare from the CD on the desk is also a very nice touch.

Only gripe is the lighting. The shadow play in the scene could be more interesting. Perhaps the table lamp in the scene could be lighted? Another minor point is the keyboard. It doesn’t look as realistic as the other items in the scene. Maybe because the keys look like perfect cubes when keys should have some slight curvature inwards? Not sure.

But overall very good render and excellent eye for details.

Very good!!! If I were you I would play around with the lighting and possibly remodel the keyboard and mouse as they are slightly let down on detail compared to say the camera.

Watching this :slight_smile:

amazing, I’m not patient enough to make that many things :smiley:

I’ve said it once and I say it again “WOW”…great job

You have a great start here. All the textures are very well mapped, now it’s time to go deep with the textures. All your objects are very flat. Add some bump and specular maps to get more variations in your objects, and then they look more interesting and realistic. The table is specially too perfect, and is the object that needs more work.
Try to define better your light, is the weaker part of your work. It’s not clear if is coming from a lamp out of frame, if is coming from a window. In the other hand, the modelling it’s excelent.

Truly amazing work! o.o

thanks for all the comments and criticisms…

which rendering method are you using?

Alvaro,I’m using Direct Lighting

Julio,

What kind of light sources are you using? Are you using AO? How have you done the display texture? have have you tried to simulate the emit effect displays have?

Well all’s good, but I still can’t read the credit card details :sad trollface:
Anyway, I think you should work on the keyboard, because it seems… off.

Nice work,

Two things I noticed :
-the size of the credit card don’t fit with the size of the CD, I’ve found it too small.
-the keys on the keyboard would be nicer if they were not flat
…exepting these two point, it’s a good pic.

Rgds
Xav

Alvaro,I’m using a light area with AO and IBL, the texture of the display I’m sweating emit

Minkovsky the keyboard was actually something I really do not detail

YAYA in Brazil there is less credit cards, mini cards

excuse my bad english,thanks for all comments

wow i first thought it was real :open_mouth:

Love it!!! Especially the Cannon camera, and the girl on the screen :wink:

I like it. Modelling is great from my point of view and texturing CD, CocaCola and so on is awesome. Maybe I think so because I am new to UV texturing, but I like it anyway.

very good medeling. I like camera…

thanks for all comments